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i fear what that blade does to you
when it cuts through your arm
im worried how long you will last
because of what it makes you become
i was there for you once
but cant be no more

i thought that i helped you
but i see that he made you go back
i know what you are going through
even tho we dont talk

i'll always be here for you
but dont leave it to long
cos even i cant help you
when your gone
©2007-2009 ~mdjp85
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ok, so this is very shit....i opened up my notepad on the train and this is what came out

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:iconsea-of-tears22:
i absolutly love this. its beautiful and it shows the strength in weakness. totally faving this one. :hug:

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:iconarchlight67:
I love the way you have left the poem sort of open-ended so you don't really know what is going-on but get a sense of it
:iconmdjp85:
hmmmph i dunno if i did that on purpose to be honest, but glad you liked it :)

i am not very good at poetry just use it as a way of getting my thoughts together

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thanks for the very kind comment, and the fav

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I'm seein' your world of people and things,
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:iconmysteribaby411:
this is my favorite of all of yours, the others are too sing songy, but you're onto something, definately. try to open up more, bring yourself into the uncomfortable. i think you'd surprise yourself. you must be a momma's boy. -0_0- very cute and honest, keep it up.

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